2017年6月15日星期四

English Poetry Project

With instructions from Ms.Kwan whom is my english teacher, we are doing a poetry project where either you write eight poems enter contest or publish poems in various ways. As it is I got enough time so I did both of them luckily.

I published Struggle in six ways and I also did the poetry contests. Here is the ppt I did to explain.
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1TkJ_swZADimrorENuKa0JKzTnex23FFnFuf3qF4vJUE/edit#slide=id.p21














Here are the poems I wrote
1.Struggle
2.Hope
3.Water
4.Friendship
5.Time
6.Future
7.Black
8.Untitled

Struggle 
By Tim Qiao

Generations to generations
we descend the stride we prompt
the destination shall be reached
but one thing ignored
left behind
the most imperative
The preliminary
Strike every moment when we try to accomplish
Challenge
Motivate
Hamper
Our daily actions
Act as if mountain in front of the path
Reminds through internal authentic mind
Catastrophizing the steps that move us forward


The ultimate confrontation
We climb through
The lesson we learnt
We may attain or fail
We must try until the end
We shall not give up
Until
Achieving greater success than triumph

We remember the moment of overcome
Or we be obliged to develop the hatred
to the essential or basic of our life
Imagine life without struggle
We be no where near


Hope
By Tim Qiao
An amazing act built on the nature of acreage
Perished in the harsh winter
Seeing bit of light
Shutter through the gloom of trees
Shining Above
Now there is hope
Where we shall take the second chance
Reform
Act
Blend over the actions of past
With the actions of future
We adjudicate momentarily on this brief winter night
Where our life starts


Water
By Tim Qiao

The essence of our life
The pleasure
The taste
The wanted
The beginning
The refreshing
The explanation
The pure quality
The pure quantities
The vapor dropped down from sky
The liquid that created human life

Friendship
By Tim Qiao

I wonder
In the veins of leaves
The bark of trees
The thickness of pavement
The limit of sky
The hydration of the clouds
The speed of air
The softness in my eyes
And the color of your hair
That I’ll never forget
If it’s really over
And this road we go through
Will truly lead us
To the thing I fear the most
The end of our friendship
The end of us


Time
By Tim Qiao

Tick tock tick tock
With time on the verge of disappear
We still have the same attitude
The tortious spent
The way how we treated our closest friend
The one whom spend every spring summer fall winter
With us
Saying no word while watching us desolate its purpose  
The purpose we may never serve
Many will try
The results shall be granted 

Future

The future
The future that
The future that I worry about
The future I primely belong
The future that prompt individual 
The future that built by the legends from the past
The future that depend the effort 
The future that light passes through 
The future human may regard upon
The future that our world may not exist 
The future that motivates to live
The future that we strive to achieve
The future that we may not reach
The future that depend on our behalf
The future 

Black
By Tim Qiao

Every night...
I airing to downstairs
Waiting for black
The friend that thoroughly make connections with
The quietness
One shall love the quietness
I urged for the sake of
Darkness
The amiable friend 
Standing aside
Creating internal peace and kind
But fear with such
The friend that permanently reside 


Untilted 
With thousands millions billions
We can't gift a draft that beyond the measure of the extravagant
The barbarous nature
Of human
The deceptive the unknown key toward greater belief
And our thoughts toward infrastructure of world
Tendency or no
We urge the demanded society to change
To re-establish the thoughts
The process of our mind
The weakest point of human

We will not dehumanize poverty as human context
We will not be additive in what we call success
We will follow our spiritual guidance instead of
the greed and desire of our flesh
Days after days we may changed 
But we may not
We need to take actions instead of imagine actions




2017年6月12日星期一

Struggle

Struggle
By Tim Qiao

Generations to generations
we descend the stride we prompt
the destination shall be reached
but one thing ignored
left behind
the most imperative
The preliminary


Strike every moment when we try to accomplish
Challenge
Motivate
Hamper
Our daily actions
Act as if mountain in front of the path
Reminds through internal authentic mind
Catastrophizing the steps that move us forward


The ultimate confrontation
We climb through
The lesson we learnt
We may attain or fail
We must try until the end
We shall not give up
Until
Achieving greater success than triumph

We remember the moment of overcome
Or we be obliged to develop the hatred
to the essential or basic of our life
Imagine life without struggle

We be no where near

2016年11月24日星期四

Do Seek Their Meat From God

Few days ago, I read " Do seek their meat from God" by Charles G.D. Roberts.  The story starts with two panthers with their cubs trying to find a food source. The panthers were probably hungry to death so they goes through the forest hoping they could find more food for the cubs. As they approach the crying sound they were getting close and close to a meal. But soon as they approaches the crying sound they sees two human babies but a hunter is there also. The story ends where hunter kills two panthers and due to rippling effect. All of panthers family dies. The theme of the story may indicate that you always need to make a decision as the nature did. As human we can choose pizza or hot dog and boyfriend or girlfriend. So in my personal opinion I think the story is about how we can make decision between things or it can be that nature is cruel. 

Vancouver Writer Festival

                                                           Vancouver Writer Festival
Being able to attend the Vancouver Writer's Festival is a pleasure. Its really a great opportunity where I can learn about others poems and writings at the same age. I always thought of imaging the poem situation and how would I feel. The most memorable poem was the one where title was pa pa. I refer to the scene that I was in China and my grandparents were telling me to do certain things. Also I really enjoyed how detailed they described some place in the poems such as China Town. I was able to paint the picture of China Town inside of my head.

2016年10月2日星期日

The Ways I Relax

     Relaxation is one of the most ambitious thing people will ever get during daily life. Pure relaxation is even harder due to the environment surrounding us. We may have annoyances and problems but pure relaxation will help us a lot . Whenever I have time to relax myself, I usually listen music, mediate over a period of fifteen minutes ,and feed myself. You may have others ways of relaxing yourself but personally I believe the three methods I have is the best way for me to get to a "zone" of pure relaxation.
     After a long day of class and work, I may find myself into exhaustion where I no longer want to work or sleep. I keep thinking about what happened during work then  its time for me to listen to music. Having a slowly played song is really helpful when I can;t falling into sleep. I find myself singing during the process of me listening the music,the slow beat and lyrics really help me getting into a satisfying mood after so much happened during the day time. Sometimes it is also good if I am lying on bed while listening music because it will get me even more relaxed. Having a fast beat song like rap is just not my style to relax because I can not lay and feel peaceful while curse language is used. It will sometimes turning me more frustrating due to how those bad words runs straight into my mind and drain my thoughts . But a peaceful music will be well because the joy and mood I get is so well. After listening a excellent choices of songs I won;t even notice or have any pressure of my stressful day.
     Meditation is also a great way for me to relax myself.  Mediation have helped me so much joining the summer and now. I have became much more focused, peaceful and attentive to whats happening around me after mediating joining the summer break. Meditation is so simply  but it have so much benefits. Meditation is also easy to execute, firstly I usually grab something soft to sit on and sit for 10 seconds then start meditation. I usually really count my breath while meditating, and its really important to clear my thoughts process joining my meditation. Its really hard to meditate fifteen minutes, so I started with like two minutes then gradually I moved up till fifteen minutes.
     Feeding myself is also another great way for me to relax myself, I certainly feel so comfortable after getting huge amount of food in after having  pressure. I know its not good for my health but I will do it anyways because I absolutely enjoy it and can;t stop doing it because how easy and effective it is to get rid of "the weight on my back".
     In conclusion, I think it is not hard to find best fit ways for me to relax but it is the time I have to relax. Me living in a developed society where I  don;t have a lot time. It is really hard for me to even split a hour to relax so lastly and most importantly of all is getting enough time for relaxing or any method will not work.